It seems it was a week for re-writes! Sue, too, read her revised story of Blossom and Reilley going to the fair. She shortened the introduction, in which the two cats find a way to the fair in what they believe is a hippie car–but really turns out to be a clown car, with a cranky clown driving it!
Their methods of food, on getting to the fair, change, too, but the end result is the same–people drop food and they eat more than their fill of cheese curds and other fair favorites, and it doesn’t go so well for them–or those nearby!–when they find their way onto the scrambler!
We talked about the opening scene and how it ties in well with how they get home in the end.